Tuesday, February 16, 2010

King Tut

Researchers have found the exact reason for King Tut's Dealth. Researchers have found that severe amount of malaria combined with a degenerative bone condition has killed the great king. Researchers said “this is the oldest genetic proof of malaria in precisely dated mummies.” This has been a 2 year examination and is a historic breakthrough.


http://www.nytimes.com/2010/02/17/science/17tut.html?ref=science
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  1. TeshaFebruary 18, 2010 at 4:54 PM

    Grade: 6/10
    Mistakes
    • Should be death
    • Death shouldn't be capitalized
    • You don't need "has" before killed
    • You can't have severe amounts of malaria. You can get malaria several times.
    • Missing comma after said. Also, the "t" in this should be capitalized.
    • Should be two-year
    • Who said it's a historic breakthrough?

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