Tuesday, January 19, 2010

U.S. Troops Patrol Haiti, Filling a Void

 More American Troops have landed in Haiti and have helped with the Earthquake. Haitian's are feeling a little out of control with all of the U.S. Military controlling what is going on around the country. They are appreciative of the help, but hope the U.S. Military to only be temporary controlling their country until their government rebuilds itself.




 http://www.nytimes.com/2010/01/20/world/americas/20haiti.html?ref=americas
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  1. TeshaJanuary 21, 2010 at 12:52 PM

    Grade: 7/10
    Mistakes:
    • Troops, earthquake and military don't need to be capitalized
    • Haitians should be plural not possessive
    • The last two sentences are opinion and need to be attributed

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